NHext time, check the angles you're using. This face is skewed, the angle between the mid-line (nose) and the horizontal is not right. The shoulder attachments seems odd to me. One eye is set higher than the other. Also, the pencil application lacks full range of values, and a lot of things lack volume - especially the hair looks flat, especially where it touches the face.

Before you fill in the detail, make sure, sure, sure that you have all the construction right. No amount of neat detail can save bad construction.

Don't follow "Drawing on the Right Side of Whatever", it's bad for you...

How you've rendered her hair is absolutely beautiful - it's soft, and i like that a lot.

I agree on the 'values' comment above, though - this piece would definately benefit from some darker darks and lighter lights. Everything seems to be mid-tone here.

i like it, it is quite good, except for the face is a little skewed. It deserves a +4 from me, keep it up!

Lovely effort, like the hair and the detail on the sleves, keep up the great work.

Don't follow "Drawing on the Right Side of Whatever", it's bad for you...
i hope youre not saying drawing on the right side of the brain. that has nothing to do with what you said.